Formal writing
Emails, applications and complaints: how to open, connect and close a formal text in Norwegian.
We teach BokmÄl, the written standard most people in Norway use.
Rules
- Greeting: Hei / Hei, Kari! (most common, also at work) â God dag (more formal) â Til den det mĂ„tte angĂ„ (To whom it may concern; very formal, rare).
- Norwegian formal style is plain: du for everyone, first names are normal. 'KjĂŠre herr Hansen' and 'De' sound old-fashioned. Don't copy 'Dear Sir/Madam'.
- Opening: Jeg viser til annonsen pĂ„ finn.no ⊠(With reference toâŠ) / Jeg skriver for Ă„ sĂžke pĂ„ stillingen som ⊠/ Takk for svar.
- Closing: Med vennlig hilsen (Kind regards; formal, also mvh), Vennlig hilsen, Hilsen (neutral). No comma after it, name on a new line.
- Before the closing: Jeg ser fram til Ä hÞre fra deg. / Ta gjerne kontakt hvis du har spÞrsmÄl.
- Connectors â cause/result: derfor (therefore), dermed (thus), pĂ„ grunn av (because of), ettersom (since). Contrast: likevel (still), imidlertid (however), derimot (on the other hand), selv om.
- Addition: dessuten (besides), i tillegg (in addition), ogsÄ, for Þvrig. Structure: for det fÞrste, for det andre, til slutt, pÄ den ene siden ⊠pÄ den andre siden.
- An adverb at the start triggers inversion: Derfor sĂžker jeg ⊠/ Likevel mener jeg ⊠/ I tillegg har jeg ⊠(not 'I tillegg jeg har' â the classic English-speaker mistake).
- Register: kjempebra â svĂŠrt bra, fĂ„ â motta, si fra â informere, sjekke â undersĂžke, fikse â ordne. Avoid abbreviations like pga. and bl.a. in applications.
- Typical mistakes: 'sĂžke for stillingen' â sĂžke PĂ ; 'interessert for' â interessert I; capitals on days and languages â norsk, mandag are lower case.
- One paragraph = one idea. Short sentences. Read it aloud before sending.
Examples
- Jeg viser til annonsen pÄ finn.no og sÞker herved pÄ stillingen som sykepleier.With reference to the advert on finn.no, I am applying for the position of nurse.
- Jeg har fem Ärs erfaring fra butikk. I tillegg snakker jeg tre sprÄk.I have five years of experience in retail. In addition, I speak three languages.
- Varen kom Þdelagt. Derfor ber jeg om Ä fÄ pengene tilbake.The item arrived damaged. I am therefore asking for a refund.
- Prosjektet er dyrt. Likevel mener jeg at vi bÞr satse pÄ det.The project is expensive. Still, I think we should go for it.
- PÄ den ene siden er det praktisk, pÄ den andre siden er det dyrt.On the one hand it's practical, on the other hand it's expensive.
- Ta gjerne kontakt hvis du har spÞrsmÄl.Feel free to get in touch if you have any questions.
- Jeg ser fram til Ă„ hĂžre fra deg.I look forward to hearing from you.
- Med vennlig hilsen â Anna NowakKind regards, â Anna Nowak